Friday, 24 May 2019
Anzac Animals
In my reading time my group Ngahere was working on Anzac animals. They had different jobs some were Mascot or working animals.
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Well done Jade. You have re-crafted your work to include the important facts and make it entertaining for the reader. I am so impressed that you have listened to feedback and adjusted your writing. Maybe you could consider what Ms Scott said about making the colours or background match the topic of your writing. Tino Pai!
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Clifford I will remember next time to match the colors of the background with the slide show.
DeleteHello Jade.I enjoyed reading about the animals that went to help out the soldiers who went to war.I find facts about animals very enjoyable to read.Maybe next time you could make the slide go slower as I ran out of time to read it all before it changed.
ReplyDeleteHello Jade.This is just a comment to let let you know I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look further to any future posts you plan to add.Have a good day.
ReplyDeletesuper creative jade loved your slide show keep up the great work
ReplyDeletelove mama