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Friday, 26 July 2019

My Recounted of my School holidays.






1 comment:

  1. Very well done Jade. With a bit of re-crafting after we chatted, you have kept the pace of your recount going with interesting ideas and detail that the reader wants to know about. I am so impressed with this writing from you. Please show Nana! Ka pai!

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