Hello everyone I have done a two facts and fiction and about my school holidays please write me what you think of which are write if I did it or not guess have fun.
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Jade Its Me Kezia,
ReplyDeleteI think that You went to your friends house and you went to the lake house but I think you didn't go to the Philippines. Well Bye!!
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Hey Kezia your right I did go to my friends house and lake house amazing you did great.
ReplyDeleteWell done Jade. I think you did not go to The Philippines. I love your detail. You have kept your writing interesting too. Just a comment, please add some commas to your sentences. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteHello Jade.WOW!just imagine if you did all these things and they were true.I think the trip to the Phillipines is a lie because you would of told people you were going there.I have never travelled outside of New Zealand.If you did go to the Phillipines,you are lucky.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Cassidy
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