Yesterday we were learning about not to tell but to show your audience about no telling them what happen we had to show them instead of telling them. Then we change the weak words in to really interesting action words. We are working about how to make are sentences have to be believable and descriptive.
Here is the thesaurus
Also here is a photo of a cappuccino for you people who don't know what it is.
This is how we did it.
Al gave Miss D coffee. 
This is the sentence we change:
Here is some weak sentence and action sentence. Al kindly rewarded Miss D with a delicious hot cappuccino.
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