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Thursday, 4 June 2020

Strong narrative

Good morning readers,


Today I am going to be talking about what writing we have been doing in Term 2. This Term we are learning about strong narratives. A strong narrative has to be believe descriptive and consistent.We can describe the setting and characters.


Today we have been learning about sick sentences.




We had to fix are boring sentences to sick sentences.


She sat down on the uncomfortable concrete floor she found it really uncomfortable.

I haven't finished my story yet but I will try to finished next week.    

 Thank you for reading my blog post please comment on my blog comment if you think I can write my story and publish it on my blog for you guys to read. Have a wonderful day.





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  1. Mrs Cassidy4 June 2020 at 20:33

    Hello Jade.
    I look forward to reading your story once it is completed.

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