I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, 28 April 2020
Apple pie
Hi guys over the weekends my Auntie Josie made some apple pie because over the lock down and also had a lot of apples to bake it with and she got some cream and ice cream for it tasted wonderful. Thanks you for reading my blog post please comment and have a nice day.
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Kia ora Jade.Yum to the apple pie. Did you help by chopping the apples?
ReplyDeleteIf you look at your first sentence you will see that it is very long. It will sound better if it is several small sentences.
I have a sister Josie (Josephine) who likes to be called Jo. Does your auntie get called other names? I am enjoying the blogs. Keep up the lovely work.
Hi Jade
ReplyDeletedid you like the pie and you said something about tik tok vs dancer battle but I don't see it on your blog
Hi Divine yeah I did talk about that to u guys but me and my sister didn't want to do it yet thank you for reading this post.
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