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Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Narrative 1 - Party Hero

Good morning readers today have been doing writing please enjoy reading.

Thank you for reading my blog post please comment have a lovely day.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jade,I guess you were the party hero. Just a little bit of work on sentences.. They can be short which makes the writing more exciting.I wonder what it would actually be like to walk on the red carpet?
    I have been enjoying seeing all your faces in the morning but decided not to today as I wanted to do more blogging.

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  2. THANK YOU so much for finding my jewels Jade.I was wondering who took them.I put them on the picnic table while I hung out the washing and when I turned around,they were GONE!!!.
    Just remember to add full stops and capital letters.It will make your work neater.Keep up the blogging.Have a great week and thanks again for getting my jewels back:)

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