Thank you for reading my blog post have a nice afternoon.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 16 April 2020
Narrate
Hi reader today I was doing some writing I really hope u enjoy reading
Thank you for reading my blog post have a nice afternoon.
Thank you for reading my blog post have a nice afternoon.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Jade,
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Next step:
In your resolution:
How is the war stopped? Who are 'they'? Why do 'they' become allies?
Hint: Is 'they' the 'gang'/ opposing forces? Does Jamie learn about the 'gangs' problems and become allies with them?
Hope this helps,
Miss D